A brilliant story- Adam is soo wonderful to read about. I kept wanting Adam to have flings with random guys and Sam to find out- but you probably guessed my mind would be throwing slash at the story as hard as it could.
You have to do something from Dean's POV for a sequel- maybe the phonecall Adam made and when he gets to the hospital- maybe him and Sam tracking Adam down- who at this point is shacking up with Connor or another hot guy- maybe Spike...you could always have Adam have to sell himself to get by- that would be fun to see their reactions to it...
I think I need to be medicated now...-wanders off as nice nurse leads her away-
I want more Hit or Misplace- you said its nearly finished this portion of it- I need to know what happen-s like now...also I am eager for another part of Shadows- which you should totally post here- and have the guy who kidnapped them grope Connor to piss Dean off- also you should throw John in just to make it fun.
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Date: 2010-06-10 06:09 pm (UTC)You have to do something from Dean's POV for a sequel- maybe the phonecall Adam made and when he gets to the hospital- maybe him and Sam tracking Adam down- who at this point is shacking up with Connor or another hot guy- maybe Spike...you could always have Adam have to sell himself to get by- that would be fun to see their reactions to it...
I think I need to be medicated now...-wanders off as nice nurse leads her away-
I want more Hit or Misplace- you said its nearly finished this portion of it- I need to know what happen-s like now...also I am eager for another part of Shadows- which you should totally post here- and have the guy who kidnapped them grope Connor to piss Dean off- also you should throw John in just to make it fun.